本题目来源于试卷: 规范制作的cet试卷4，类别为 测试专用
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Directions: For this pavd24kt 0lyo)sfi k4 ,krt, n256 iw:bihir 7g+uiy you are allowed 30 minutes to write a news report to your campus newspaper on a visit to a Hope elementary school organized by your Student Union. You should write at lei uig6bi i:5rw hn+72yast 120 words but no more than 180 words.
参考答案:
A two-day visit to Fanhai Hope Elementary School organized by the Student Union of our university has been completed as scheduled this weekend. Aiming at fostering college students' service awareness and helping pupils of rural areas better understand the colorful college life so as to motivate them to study harder, the Student Union organized an activity named A Trip of Love Seed. A team of 30 college students participated in this trip. The visit was warmly welcomed by all the students and staff of Fanhai, followed by a range of colorful activities such as the interaction among students about the fascinating college life, a visit to the school art show of students' works of painting and handicraft and teaching activities focusing on showing the magical science world to the pupils. Both the pupils and our college students were actively involved in all these brilliant activities. And the headmaster of Fanhai spoke highly of this trip as well as the devotion, enthusiasm and creativity of our students.
本题详细解析:
第1段介绍新闻要素：时间、地点和事件；第2段介绍活动的目的，使用现在分词短语Aiming at...作目的状语，增加句式多样性；第3段恰当使用短句点 05dulju b 7vfk8 .9xpww:cfl8明参加活动的人数；第4段使用长句详细介绍活动经过，内容翔实c: klpdu .b5vlf7 xj wfu9w088；第5段通过列举法详细说明活动内容，语言凝练；第6、7段描述活动效果：学生积极参与，校长给予高度评价。
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